Fairy Tale

Once upon a time there was a sixteen years old girl called Alice. She lived in New York city with her stepfather and her one year younger stepsister in a big house. She was a very nice and inteligent young girl, but a little bit shy. She wasn't so happy because her parents died some years ago and she didn't liked to live with her stepfather and her stepsister because they didn't care about her. She was only happy when she could dance, because she loved it since she was a little girl.
One day, when she went to school, she met a very handsome boy. She realized that he was the famous dancer Dave Jones. She felt immediatly in love with him, but he didn't. First he only saw her as a good friend, but when he saw her dancing, he change his opinion and felt in love with her.
They pass many times together having fun.
But one day, Alice and Dave had a discussion and they were angry with each other. They believe that their love had ended, and Alice could't return to dance because it remembered it to much to Dave.
It approaching a dance competition and Dave was the moderator. Alice's friends wanted to persuade Alice to go to the competition and beat Eva, she was the enemie of Alice.
Alice would like to go because it was her dream to dance, but finally she diceded to not dance, only for watch the competition.
When almost ended the competition, Dave dedicated her a song because he loved her yet and Alice got up on the stage to dance with him. They kiss and were happy forever.



Why I put all 3 writings on here?

I put all the 3 writings on this blog because I can't choose which is the best, so I decided to poste all of them. I like all three writings, but in my opinion I think that the writing about Thirteen and Adrian Mole is better than the others because my teacher gives me a 9 out of 10 and the email I send her she gives me a 7. And I don't know the mark of the Fairy Tale yet, but I think that in this writing I can't top the 9.